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FINALLY, MY FIRST EVER DECENT COMIC. FINISHED.
I'm freaking proud~~~

I also plan on making a bunch more. Any ideas/requests of what I should do next? (oh and don't request anything that doesn't involve characters from my alt account: ~RainbowERIC

Oh yeah. sorry for the swearing at the end. I think it was just fitting.

P.S. PLEASE CRITIQUE BEFORE MY PREMIE RUNS OUT IN TWO DAYS.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Well, I honestly love it. My favorite panel is the third panel. It is a bit short. For example, she only buys in one panel. Also, why is Chantelle's (I think that is her name) hair have shines but nothing else has shines or shading? The backgrounds look great to me, especially the first panel's. The red background could have more depth or detail like the others, even compared to the last panel with the sparkles. Does the first panel with Fubbo not have the blue cheeks like the one right after it for a reason? Each panel/box could be straighter, but at the same time it gives it a natural and/or cute, cartoony look. I love the style, too. Hmm, I think that's it... I'm still not really any better at making comics.... <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap"/>