Saori

I like this deviation, but i really have some concerns.

First, i would like to talk about body porportion and guidlines. I know you use guidlines ( past experiances,) but i arm is fatter than the other, which i know you can fix. Also the neck and head shape could be fixed by not being as "fluffy". But i am glad that you gave it a bit of a curvier body than your earlier stuff. PROPS.

Next i would like to talk about originality. To tell you the truth, even though it "catches" your eye, rainbow girl?guys are overdone, like, dead overdone. But im glad that you only used a few more pinker colours for the clothes. I really enjoyed the shirt underneath, also.

Also, i really think you should work on your colouring. It is WAY too sketchy, not trying to imply anything rude. I know you can do better. Are you rushing? Because if you are, trust me. It gets you NOWHERE <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>...

Overall, i love the haistyle, face, and overall style... But if your biggest priority is to be the best you can be, and i know you can! keep on drawing!